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1101208013 Stacy 詹家璿
My favorite room of my house is living room. Because my family and I always sit on sofa there to chat. I like that atmosphere. Besides, there are television, chairs and sofa, including conputers. So I can do a lot of things there and relax myself. Living room of my house is large. I can play piano, jump or do excerise. I relly like it and enjoy staying there. Of course my family do. Thus, if I go back my home, I will spend more than 7 hours staying living room. Sometimes, my parents watch television late and they will sleep on sofa. It’s really comfortable and enjoyable. Therefore, we often clean it up, we won’t make it messy. My mother cares about how our room hyginere is. That is, when we are available, we clean our house together, especially living room. To sum up, living room is like a beautiful place. There is no stress, peace only! When someones asks about my living room, I just tell them that it’s unique and a paradise.

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1101208064 UL1B Kate 凃倖慈
My favorite dish Topic sentence: There are many delicious and different typed dishes in the world. For me, I think my favorite dishes are not only the tastes but also the meanings of the dishes. Take myself for example, I like to eat the dishes made by my father and mother, because that’s more healthy, tasty and safety.

Supporting sentence:
In the beginning, I like to eat hot and sour soup, that makes me feel satisfied, and there are many foods in the soup, I can eat many things at the same time. Second, I like to eat photo chopped, it tastes very great and a little bit sour. This one is my favorite. For the meaning of this dish, it is the unique dish, because it was invented from my grandmother. She taught my mother how to make it, and how it will taste good. Because of love, the dish tastes better.

Concluding sentence: In conclusion, I want to try every food I want, that will make me glad and satisfied, especially that dish is my favorite one.